Arkhon Image Test: Opinions?
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It looks good. I'd definately say that was an Arkhon if you hadn't already said so.
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The Arhkons are actually one of my favorite factions, here are my thoughts:
Your rendition is good, though in my opinion it is lacking as follows:
Too soft. The Arhkon do have a resemblance to dogs, but your image looks too dog-like. I think the problem is that you've gone a little too soft with the edges (if that makes any sense). Making their skin appear a bit rougher - like that of a hairless cat may be enough to make the creature seem more alien. Another way to look at it is to pronounce their bone structure more, thus slightly altering their appearance.
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Otherwise, it's a great image.
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Your rendition is good, though in my opinion it is lacking as follows:
Too soft. The Arhkon do have a resemblance to dogs, but your image looks too dog-like. I think the problem is that you've gone a little too soft with the edges (if that makes any sense). Making their skin appear a bit rougher - like that of a hairless cat may be enough to make the creature seem more alien. Another way to look at it is to pronounce their bone structure more, thus slightly altering their appearance.
Just my two lek.
Otherwise, it's a great image.
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Re: Arkhon Image Test: Opinions?
el magico -- darklorddc wrote:Arkhon Test Image
I'm testing to see if I can do a fair rendition of the Arkhon, an alien species from the Rifts Role-playing game. I used off-the-shelf character morphs for a werewolf and altered it to match the Arkhon pictured in the Rifts South America 2 worldbook. While it describes them as relatively hairless, the description does not give coloration, so I presume they have a wide variety of colors, like we do.
If you're familiar with the Arkhon, let me know how close you think this is, esp. compare with the picture in SA2, as that's what I was shooting for. I specifically want to see if I can get close just with off-the-shelf software already available with available morphs, so that I can reproduce a likeness without violating the Palladium policy toward creating software that duplicates their IP.
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Sorry. It's what popped to mind. I do tend to agree with Josh that you'd want a bit rougher-looking skin, though.
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I'd like to see some patches of fur dyed in designs like tattoos to designate rank/family group, maybe some braided patches of fur.
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Josh Sinsapaugh wrote:The Arhkons are actually one of my favorite factions
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I 100% completely agree. The Arkhons should be a more powerful faction based on the fact's that thier a inter planetary conquoring force.. I think the way the book has them sorta all pinned down is sad .. They should truely be one of the more powerful factions on Rifts earth if you ask me.
I think thier severly under utilized as an overall species. Not to mention .. What happened to the other 100'000 ? Whats been going on in Arkhon space ?
But your rendition looks really really good.
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Good start, but yeah, needs to look more 'harsh edged' and ferral.
The suggestion of tattoo's / clan markings would go a long way as well.![Big Grin :D](./images/smilies/biggrin.gif)
The suggestion of tattoo's / clan markings would go a long way as well.
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One thing I was taught when I was learning maya; "ALWAYS [cenosred] around with your specularity... a good specular setting can make a texture map, while a bad one will kill it"
... damn... now I'm jonsing for maya again... why do CGI programms have to be so [censored for 10 minutes] expensive?
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I think the second is a definite improvement. For some reason I think of the ears being bigger, and a bit more bat like, but I'm not sure why. Keep playing with the textures, but it looks good.
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el magico -- darklorddc wrote:Did a few minor alterations and used a very alien organic skin map
Arkhon take 2
Gah! Ugly dog!
Good pic, though the teeth need to pop out more, color-wise. I don't know if they're the skin color, or if they're a different color and the similarity is due to shadows, but they look to be the same shade as the skin. Aside from that, awesome
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I like it, though the darkness of the image makes it difficult to discern details.
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Wow. I thought the title of this thread was something else entirely.
Hi! We're the Arkhons, and we're here to invade your world. (Flash to a screen with a couple hot Arkhon babes standing on flying platforms, holding large plasma bazookas) Our technology is superior to anything else you can get on Rifts Earth, even those pesky Naruni. (Scenes of Arkhons mowing through villages, with screaming women and children)
Every single one of us can fly, and our military precision is such that even the Megaversal Legion can't stand against us. (Scenes of explosions, more violence, and destroyed jungle.)
So if you'd like to surrender, and acknowledge us as your new lords and masters, please call Arkhon HQ in South America today. We'll give you a comfortable life as slaves, where you'll be sentenced to an agonizing existence of hard labor. Your inferior race is doomed!
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Hi! We're the Arkhons, and we're here to invade your world. (Flash to a screen with a couple hot Arkhon babes standing on flying platforms, holding large plasma bazookas) Our technology is superior to anything else you can get on Rifts Earth, even those pesky Naruni. (Scenes of Arkhons mowing through villages, with screaming women and children)
Every single one of us can fly, and our military precision is such that even the Megaversal Legion can't stand against us. (Scenes of explosions, more violence, and destroyed jungle.)
So if you'd like to surrender, and acknowledge us as your new lords and masters, please call Arkhon HQ in South America today. We'll give you a comfortable life as slaves, where you'll be sentenced to an agonizing existence of hard labor. Your inferior race is doomed!
This public service announcement has been brought to you by the Arkhon Empire....
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Re: Arkhon Image Test: Opinions?
el magico -- darklorddc wrote:Did a few minor alterations and used a very alien organic skin map
Arkhon take 2
Definite improvement.
Great job, DLDC.
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Another thing, their eyes are not cat eyes, thats throwing me off.
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rat_bastard wrote:Another thing, their eyes are not cat eyes, thats throwing me off.
He makes a good point, and I hope I can make one too.
I like how they are done in the second one, but now it looks even more like a dog. it has these jowls that make the muzzle seem far to prominent. I recall the archon being a mixture of reptile and cat, I can't remember dog being in there. I think a middle point between the first and second would be better, soft but scaly. I do think the second one works a lot better than the first, but the picture in my head has a more compact muzzle, wider instead of long and narrow. kind of like if a humans' jaw popped out like a sharks', but was permanently extended. A face sized projection, rather than the equivalent of putting the bottom half of your face, on the front. Throw in some sinuous and slender for good mesure, as opposed to super stocky wolf man. that might work well, since they are described as somewhat slender. I know you are just working with what you've got, but you should be able to adjust muscle tone/density.
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Elongate the ears towards the tips and I think you got it. ![Okay :ok:](./images/smilies/bigok.gif)
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Vey nice, when can I make an appointment for a rendering of my devilishly handsome self?
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on a side note, maybe if you put it on a white background or something it'd be more plainly visible. not realistic to have a blank white space, but it would definitely make the model stand out =S
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Everytime I think of Arkhons, I think of Scooby Doo pissed off and carry the biggest frakking gun he could find!
Other then that, you're doing some good work there, el magico!
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Well I've given you some feedback on DA, but I think if you wash out that skin color with a yellowish grey color you'll get closer, and make sure to include definate patterns when making individuals, stripes, spots, etc - not to mention gloves, clothing etc.
I'm actually happy with the face, personally.
I'm actually happy with the face, personally.
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Nice pic. I like the changes as time went along. I have to make sure to see how it continues to evolve. Please keep it coming.
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It,s O.k.